Dear Diary,
I am but o so confused. I was sure she was the one, that her beauty would be mine, that I could possibly want nothing more. But now, everything is foggy. I’ve meet Juliet. Rosaline looks like a crow compared to her. She is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. For her, I would do anything. I now no longer need to feel the pain of love. I won’t have to weep over Rosaline, as she never wanted to contribute her beauty to the world. I won’t have to cry to Benvelio about her selfish ways. Yet my head will still be turning, spinning in circles, lost and confused by this thing called love.
Juliet will soon be mine. I will make sure of that. I would do anything for her to feel for me, the way I feel about her, but I just don’t know if she does yet. Love has made me do some crazy things, but this sure has to be the craziest of all. Going after Juliet. She is filled with more knowledge, beauty, and kindness than any one I have ever let my eyes stray to. Two days I have known her, and already I’m head over heels. Soon I will not only be head over heals, but down on one knee, ready to propose.
Diary please give me the power to get her. Give me the power to convince her to carry me inside her, for her to be mine forever. There is nothing I have ever loved more than her. There is nothing I have ever felt this strongly about. I know I would take a knife to the chest, if I just meant she would allow me to spend time with her. All I want is she.
I’ll let you know how things go,
Until then,
Sincerely,
Romeo
I wrote this letter to show how romantic Romeo is. I wanted to capture is personality but at the same time show some sort of pot going on in the story. I also wanted to really prove how easily he falls for girls. I did this by mentioning that her wants Juliet more than Rosaline. This shows that just recently he felt similar to this about a whole different girl. I captured the plot in this entry by saying how they can’t be together. All though the timing in the book, and the entry is a little off, I think I do a good job showing all of this. This entry also captures Romeo’s personality. It shows how he really is just a hopeless romantic, by how he is writing how in love he is. I think this is important because he is known as a famous character all around the world, at every age as the big, nice, amazing guy character. He is also portrayed like this in the book, so it is important that in his own diary entry, it is clear how he is feeling, and that this known personality for him is in fact accurate.
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