Thursday, March 22, 2012

Deadly Little Lies


I stare at you, long to hold you near,
But you look away, ignore me,
Then I follow your lead, and look in other directions,
And suddenly go back to the past, and look at me once I again,
Except I am gone,
Can I ever let myself come back?

            This poem basically sums up the relationship between Ben and Camelia in the book Deadly Little Lies by Laurie Stolarz. This book is a sequel to the book Deadly Little Secrets, and has a very similar plot. It is about a girl who is basically being stalked by someone, and receiving death threats, and she is trying to figure out who. While this is happening she is also figuring out that she’s a little by physic. She is a sculptor, and recently she has been sculpting random things like a pomegranate, or a horse, and then seeing them somewhere later. She is also hearing voices in her head, then actually hearing them later.

            While this is all going on she is madly in love with this guy Ben. Ben loves her back, but is scared to be with her, because he doesn’t want to hurt her, and he sort of accidentally killed his ex-girlfriend. Since Ben refuses to be with her, she starts to like this guy she works with, Adam. The only problem she sees though is that Adam isn’t Ben. Although, it turns out later that Adam Was Ben’s ex-girlfriends boyfriend before she died, and he came back two years after she died to get back at Ben by taking Camelia from him, although he actually starts to like her, even though she’s in love with Ben.

            So anyways, this poem relates to their relationship because Camelia is madly in love with Ben, which the poem represents by looking, but Ben refuses to acknowledge her, and like the poem, even refuses to look at her, so she gives up and moves to Adam, but then Ben realizes that he can, and wants to be with her, but she really likes Adam, and after everything she doesn’t know if she can even let herself be with Ben, especially cause she realized that he really can hurt her. Anyways eventually she realizes Adam was a jerk for what he did, and even 

Thursday, March 15, 2012

Much to do About Nothing


                        Dear Friend,

            I really encourage you to go see the Shakespeare play Much to do About Nothing. It is highly entertaining and humorous, especially at the theater we saw it at. This play is about a girl and a guy who are in love, but all they do is pick on each other. They must be tricked into realizing their love. Along with this, the girl’s cousin falls in love with a guy. The guys friend’s evil brother tries to break them up, so she fakes a death, and then comes back to life, and they marry. This is one of the few Shakespeare plays were no one actually dies or gets hurt. This was a nice change from the normal moody, gloomy stuff that is usually incorporated in his plays.

           When I was watching the play I was amazed at how un confusing and clear a Shakespeare play could actually be. Of course the workshop I took before were I learned the plot of the story helped, but the main thing that really allowed me to understand this play was the acting. The actors, The actors did a great job of portraying their characters, and while watching it was almost always clear what was happening and going on, something that continuous to confuse me in Romeo and Juliet.
           
            I have to say if given the choice, I would rather read this, than Romeo and Juliet. This is because this play happens to be more entertaining and humorous. However Romeo and Juliet supposedly have all this hummer in it, but just reading it, it is very hard to find. Maybe if I were to watch a play of Romeo and Juliet I would think differently because the acting would help me to better understand it.

            In conclusion I highly recommend you go see this. It is very entertaining, amusing, and kept me attached through the whole thing. If given the choice I would definitely go see it, and even read it over Romeo and Juliet. I had an excellent time watching it, and think that the directors and actors were all amazing. The workshop also sincerely helped me to understand what were going on and the plot, even though it was a little confusing, it was still very clear.

                        You should definitely go see this,
                        Sincerely,
                        Becca

Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Romeo and Juliet--- Diary entry


            Dear Diary,

                        I am but o so confused. I was sure she was the one, that her beauty would be mine, that I could possibly want nothing more. But now, everything is foggy. I’ve meet Juliet. Rosaline looks like a crow compared to her. She is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. For her, I would do anything. I now no longer need to feel the pain of love. I won’t have to weep over Rosaline, as she never wanted to contribute her beauty to the world. I won’t have to cry to Benvelio about her selfish ways. Yet my head will still be turning, spinning in circles, lost and confused by this thing called love.

            Juliet will soon be mine. I will make sure of that. I would do anything for her to feel for me, the way I feel about her, but I just don’t know if she does yet. Love has made me do some crazy things, but this sure has to be the craziest of all. Going after Juliet. She is filled with more knowledge, beauty, and kindness than any one I have ever let my eyes stray to. Two days I have known her, and already I’m head over heels. Soon I will not only be head over heals, but down on one knee, ready to propose.

            Diary please give me the power to get her. Give me the power to convince her to carry me inside her, for her to be mine forever. There is nothing I have ever loved more than her. There is nothing I have ever felt this strongly about. I know I would take a knife to the chest, if I just meant she would allow me to spend time with her. All I want is she.

                        I’ll let you know how things go,
                        Until then,
                       
                        Sincerely,
                       
Romeo

            I wrote this letter to show how romantic Romeo is. I wanted to capture is personality but at the same time show some sort of pot going on in the story. I also wanted to really prove how easily he falls for girls. I did this by mentioning that her wants Juliet more than Rosaline. This shows that just recently he felt similar to this about a whole different girl. I captured the plot in this entry by saying how they can’t be together. All though the timing in the book, and the entry is a little off, I think I do a good job showing all of this. This entry also captures Romeo’s personality. It shows how he really is just a hopeless romantic, by how he is writing how in love he is. I think this is important because he is known as a famous character all around the world, at every age as the big, nice, amazing guy character. He is also portrayed like this in the book, so it is important that in his own diary entry, it is clear how he is feeling, and that this known personality for him is in fact accurate. 

Thursday, March 1, 2012

Letter to Friend on Romeo and Juliet


Dear Friend,

            I have recently just begun reading Romeo and Juliet. So far it is clear to see why this book is such a famous book. Shakespeare does an amazing job including details, and really giving a clear picture of what is going on, and who the characters are, and their personalities. Even though it is a play, therefore there are no details (main details) written by a narrator, it is still clear to see them, as if they were in book form. He is able to add humor into it without taking away from the plot, and the seriousness of it, but so you can still see the puns and word play. Less then twenty pages in, the plot is already clear, many characters have been introduced, and you can guess what the main problem is going to be.

            Although the writing style of the book may be a little confusing, the majority of it can be understood. Of course the definitions, and explanations on the side are helpful, I have found that just by reading slowly and carefully understanding the concept, and the idea of what is being said isn’t that challenging. The only Shakespeare I have read before is a paraphrase of Midsummer Nights Dream, which was when I was much younger. I thought it was very interesting, and I appreciated that I was able to read the story without all the confusing language, but I have to say I much prefer this. Although it is more challenging and time consuming to read, the language of the book really helps to make it what it is, and describe the scenery.

            So far in the book it is clear that there is a rivalry between the Montague’s and the Capulet’s. It seems to go even beyond their families but also to their servants. You also know that Romeo is upset about something. All you know that is love in cannot have, but you do not know why yet. It is also clear that the royal families do not appreciate the fighting between these families. I am wondering what the rest of the town thinks about this, and why this rivalry started. Also, the relationships between Romeo and his parents, and Juliet, and her parents.

            If you are planning to read shake spear I would definitely recommend reading some of the definitions from the side before you start, and to make sure you read slowly, and really pay attention to every word and how it is used. I also recommend trying to paraphrase the phrases or lines you are confused by, because missing one line can kind of throw the rest of the story off, because most things seem to relate to each other. One more thing I would recommend is trying to familiarize your self with the story before you start, because that can also help things make more sense.

            I hope you read some Shakespeare, and you are able to enjoy it as much as I am. Good Luck!

                        Becca

Thursday, February 23, 2012

Poems


            As we discussed and learned about poetry during class, I began to make comparisons about all the different types of poetry there are, and how they relate and how they are different. When doing this I picked three of the poems that we read, or listened to in class. All very different, and all very unique. The three poems I picked are Harlem by Langston Hughes, My Mistress’ Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun sonnet 130 by William Shakespeare, and If I Should Have a Daughter by Sarah Kay. There are many reasons why I picked these three poems; they are all very different in many ways, including length, topic, and style, they are all very creative, and meaningful, and these were probably my three favorite poems that we read during class.

            Harlem is a what happens to poem, and has a ton of literary devices. This poem is about dream, and what happens when you ignore them. My Mistress’ Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun is about a intimate friend of Shakespeare, and how even though she is by all means not perfect, he still loves her. It is a sonnet, and follows the correct rhyme scheme and the iambic pentameter. If I Should Have a Daughter is a poem that was intended to be said out loud. This poem also has a lot of literary devices, and deeper meaning. It is about what a mother would do, and teach her daughter is she was to have one, one day.

            There are many similarities between these poems, but also many differences. All of these poems have many literary devices. They use similes and metaphors mostly, to show the deeper meaning of the poems. Also, besides the sonnet, they all use their own rhyme patterns, and follow their own beats. All of these poems have deeper meaning; you just have to read closely, and carefully to figure out what they are, and what the poems are really about. However they are all about different things, one about dreams, one about love, and one about teaching. Still these poems are very similar. Although on the outside they may seem very different, but if you look closely they are extremely similar.

            Also, if you think about it, they are all wondering about something in the feature, although they really all know the answer. Harlem is seeing if you can really put of a dream, or ignore, and forget about it. You can tell the author has thought about doing this, but realized it is simply impossible. My Mistress’ Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun is kind of showing that he really doesn’t like the outside of this girl, and is probably embarrassed by her, but maybe he tried being without her before, and realized it was all worth it. If I Should Have a Daughter seems to be about what her mother did for her as a child, or what she wishes she had done. She is trying to relive, or maybe even remake her childhood, by making what she wants for something else. As you can see although these poems are different, they are all so incredibly similar.

            

Thursday, February 16, 2012

Untitled---> Sonnet


You’re the same as you wake, and as you sleep
Your colors make you and show your beauty
You give light, and take it without a peep
Providing us with heat is your duty
Your colors are simply magnificent
Orange, red, and yellow and even pink
Together you are really excellent
As we wake and sleep you change in a blink

You try and get me up in the morning
And you try to put me to sleep at night
You really are never ever boring
Always trying to shine loud, strong, and bright

You are the sun, always in the sky
Without you our life would not be complete

Monday, February 6, 2012

Poems

Poem on painting:

This painting is you,
and even has you in it,
it is your childhood,
and your favorite stories,
it is your feelings,
and the people who caused them

This painting is colors,
and emotions,
and wonderful designs
it is swirls,
and words,
and the letters than make them

This painting is all of pollock and even more


What is poetry poem:

Poetry is you
Poetry is whatever you want it to be
it is the heart and soul of every human being
it is words

Words that for some people may be nothing
but is really everything
Emotions, feelings, and your own world wrapped up into one

Poetry is you
Poetry is whatever you want it to be
Poetry is everything


What happens to a dream


What happens to a destroyed dream

does it disapear
and never come back 
until its just forever gone


Or does it never truly go away
until it reforms
and build and build and build
until it is back to normal

What truly happens to a destroyed dream